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Cassius (Free verse) by helenwales

Hot fur, a black slip of satin back, Eyes narrowed and teeth and claw keen, Through shutted dark yellow fire orb stares, Rippled spine of straightening sheet, You're waiting. Take or leave it, cold as ice, The vibration luring the scratch depart, Hot on my thigh your grinning jaw with distained sparse forest smiles, I care hiss he with shivering potential, Straightened finger tipped crescent moon, And fulfilled with desires all, For tonight he will accept.

Petit Robinet 11-Oct-06/6:05 AM
You know what it is to have a bite of pussycat in your bedridden-nudity alleged Helen of Wales?

A pussycat in the bed makes for a poem, but not of “potential”. It is a DANGER. Material NOT "potential".

See to them my scars? Look at my scars!

Try stronger. Je te donne des SIX.




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