Free verse № 147416 Pump the Guns by oddgreenout Member since 2006 · Posted 13 Oct 2006 · 2 comments feeling it the burn it it burns like a furnace pump it and then pump it a hiss like dry steam it burns oh how it burns it makes muscle so pump it Rate it 0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends. 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Worst Best Send crowd 4.0 mean 4.00 weighted 4.88 rank 10154 views 118 View voting details → 4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far A random poem →N
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