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Pump the Guns (Free verse) by oddgreenout feeling it the burn it
it burns like a furnace
pump it and then pump it
a hiss like dry steam it
burns oh how it burns it
makes muscle so pump it
Up the ladder:
The Stab
Down the ladder:
a casting is rescued
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Posted: October 13, 2006 3:43 AM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2006 3:43 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10153 Comments:
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Line one - 'then'?