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Pump the Guns
(
Free verse
) by
oddgreenout
feeling it the burn it it burns like a furnace pump it and then pump it a hiss like dry steam it burns oh how it burns it makes muscle so pump it
Ranger
13-Oct-06/3:55 AM
Nice idea, could do with a little more punctuation.
Line one - 'then'?
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