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Visions Divulge (Free verse) by thing1
with my eyes turned heaven high
i look up with present in hand
and past on my back searching
for the future to come
the revelations pronounced
to transpire formerly
my life was desolate and cold
now filled with the quest
for significance and the strife
for prosperity i sit here
surrounded by those of destiny
revealed with minds headstrong
in guided strides wishing hoping
that i one day may accomplish
those visions unknown to me in deep
thought about who i am what i am
and what i want to be a vast void
pervades my dwelling fleshly to quell
those aspirations esteemed contending
with mustard-yellow clouds suspended
in a sea of grey ultimately
proclaimed triumphant in this
contention of consequence
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10178
Posted: June 11, 2004 11:35 PM PDT; Last modified: June 11, 2004 11:35 PM PDT
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