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criminal (Free verse) by durr_T_hip_E cling to
stringy times curling
alabaster grapevines into
colliding scopes
stopping life
corroded in
dripping moonlit
alleyways and parks
benchmarked for
standard deviation from the line
tango dancing termites weaving life
through knotty nights
biting about the edge
barking at kites
Up the ladder:
Drowned in Free Verse
Down the ladder:
Givin' in
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Posted: March 23, 2005 2:25 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2005 2:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10156 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.11.135
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24-Mar-05/8:21 AM
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Sorry, don't get it overall. Some nice language.
it sounds nice but thats all it does, a word to the wise: don't try to build a hidden "meaning" when it isn't there, either be tricky or be straight forward but dont have nothing
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