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Member since 2005 · Posted 23 Mar 2005 · 2 comments

cling to stringy times curling alabaster grapevines into colliding scopes stopping life corroded in dripping moonlit alleyways and parks benchmarked for standard deviation from the line tango dancing termites weaving life through knotty nights biting about the edge barking at kites

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[5] Dovina 24-Mar-05/8:21 AM Reply

Sorry, don't get it overall. Some nice language.

[6] dancin_n_da_moonlite 2-Apr-05/10:10 AM Reply

it sounds nice but thats all it does, a word to the wise: don't try to build a hidden "meaning" when it isn't there, either be tricky or be straight forward but dont have nothing