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criminal (Free verse) by durr_T_hip_E

cling to stringy times curling alabaster grapevines into colliding scopes stopping life corroded in dripping moonlit alleyways and parks benchmarked for standard deviation from the line tango dancing termites weaving life through knotty nights biting about the edge barking at kites

Dovina 24-Mar-05/8:21 AM
Sorry, don't get it overall. Some nice language.




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