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Do 20 always make this poem sense? (Other) by Prince of Void
There is always a man decide at the matter of to be or not be There is always a dream ahead of me There is always a road to take for the further place There is always a land to became a home for those homeless seekers There is always a pain to make your eyes open There is always a moment to make you wonder There is always a secret to be unfold and unsaid inside There is always a p.o.v. to see the world differently There is always a word make your life meaningful at the edge of voidnesss There is always a day to seize your day There is always a scenario can be without a plot There is always a complex lies beneath There is always a war makes horrors There is always a policy to be abused There is always another technology to replace or misplaced There is always alternative form to reform There is always the knowledge we failed to learn There is always a placeless place for the creator There is always another form of life makes you alive Do 20 always make this poem sense? There is always a sense behind we might not be aware of that

Up the ladder: trained
Down the ladder: Aromatherapy

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10174
Posted: January 15, 2006 7:38 AM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2006 7:38 AM PST
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[n/a] Prince of Void @ 213.207.224.156 | 15-Jan-06/7:39 AM | Reply
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[4] Dovina @ 209.247.222.93 | 15-Jan-06/5:03 PM | Reply
To answer your title question, no. It would help to get the grammar right; but even then, I don't see that it makes sense.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 213.207.224.156 > Dovina | 15-Jan-06/11:15 PM | Reply
can u tell me what's the right grammar ,?
[4] zodiac @ 216.67.6.38 > Prince of Void | 15-Jan-06/11:53 PM | Reply
Can you tell us what a line like "Do 20 always make this poem sense" means?
[4] zodiac @ 209.193.14.154 | 17-Jan-06/10:20 AM | Reply
This poem does not make sense.
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