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Home sweet home (Free verse) by nicole081083
It's disturbingly quiet in this empty home
A very sad and depressing scene
Ghosts of laughter seem to roam
The hallways and my dreams
No one comes to visit
No one seems to call
Nothing lifts my spirit
Nothing at all
Some days I hear you sing
And I see your smiling face
Makes me think about the joy it used to bring
I miss that happy place
I guess home really is where the heart is
And with you wast he most at home I feel
Not a Newbie's or the fizz
Our friendship was real
Some say your life is what you make it
Not sure if that's true
I kind of wonder where my life went
Wish there was something I could do
To bring back the laughter and the joy
The contentment I felt when we didn't even speak a word
Sometimes I even miss the noise
I thought we understood each other, I must be absurd
Guess it's trule like that song I heard the other day
"you can dream about it every now and then"
As Wynonna would say
"But you can't go home again"
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10165
Posted: February 23, 2005 9:15 AM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2005 9:15 AM PST
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