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Love (Free verse) by untamed_fierce Love is like breathing.
How can you stop?
Up the ladder:
In my palm
Down the ladder:
"Joseph, Joseph"
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Posted: June 16, 2005 7:57 PM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2005 7:57 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10148 Comments:
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lil_evil_boi @ 70.68.76.244
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16-Jun-05/8:00 PM
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True. But you can stop by hating someone.
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sacred_poet_me @ 70.68.76.244
> lil_evil_boi
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16-Jun-05/9:04 PM
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Agree.
good start.. where are the other stanzas?
I'll vote when you're done.
rockmage is worng. Nevertheless, this is a weak or incomplete poem.
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