am i on speaker phone? good~

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 May 2004 · 4 comments

when time stands still and tracy's turned down when your eyes search from your soul's depths into mine, that's when my heart feels love. so destiny struck again and hope is all i know our energies converge two tidal waves crashing white spray, into foam and from foam into air. asking for forever love on both ends, balance the agreement to fly both pair of angel wings lifting and taking flight swooping into his arms.

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[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 24-May-04/10:54 AM Reply

too personal without any true depth. Just Emoting, and not even very strongly. Nice imagery but it feels like its coming from nowhere only to end up going nowhere. No suggestions, because I'm not really sure how you could make this better.

[n/a] peaceseeker › thepinkbunnyofdoom 26-May-04/12:59 PM Reply

my skin is hereby tougher~

[8] sliver 24-May-04/9:12 PM Reply

I do like the imagery though, especially the foam spraying. 8

[n/a] peaceseeker › sliver 26-May-04/1:00 PM Reply

wow, i really needed that - this was from my soul ~ sometimes compliments give breath where there is life.