Re: a comment on Gods Musician: Grave Digger by SupremeDreamer	14-Mar-04/5:34 AM
Not to dishearten you old bean, but I was actually searching for all poemes with 'God', 'Angel', 'Love' or 'Above' in their titles in order to complete the Love-Above Liste. Cheers! -10-
Re: a comment on A pinch from the snuff box by Jeremi B. Handrinos	14-Mar-04/5:30 AM
You do entertain the most curious fancies.
Re: a comment on Zodiac's Visit to Micky D's by Oej-Oej	11-Mar-04/7:01 AM
bow'ls
Re: a comment on Zodiac's Visit to Micky D's by Oej-Oej	11-Mar-04/4:50 AM
Unfortunately the -=Dark_Angel=- TEN OF SHAME loses all its pow'r if you admit it's PATENTLY-FALSE. -10-
Re: Zodiac's Visit to Micky D's by Oej-Oej	10-Mar-04/10:14 AM
Wacky numbers -- hilarious!!!
Re: Causation by fevriere	10-Mar-04/6:25 AM
I'm miles from home, I'm hurting, I'm in a cafe, and I write. I write.
Re: The Cessation of Fidelity by wilco	9-Mar-04/8:01 AM
guff
Re: a comment on Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Mar-04/1:05 AM
Limpest possible reply.
Re: a comment on Terrors Children by BrandonW	7-Mar-04/6:15 PM
Would you go out, please!
Re: depressed by PhSbLoNdE569	7-Mar-04/1:15 PM
[X] AABB rhyming scheme [_] About romantic love [_] About poetry-writing [X] About suicide or self-mutilation [_] Arbitrary indentation [_] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but in the third person [X] Clerical errors [X] Cliched imagery (staring out of window, pits of despair) [X] Cliched rhymes (love/above etc.) [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [_] Devoid of rhyme [_] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wond'rous or fantastical imagery [_] Drug references [_] Elves, unicorns, etc. [_] Exclamation points used to mark 'the funny bits' [_] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Leaving rant [_] Lower case only [X] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [_] Overabundance of ellipses [X] Overuse of 'depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness, etc) [_] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Protagonist has a smug name [_] Rage against the machine [_] References to the author's 'social life' [_] Repetition of a single word or phrase to the point of nausea [_] Sanctimoniously moral [X] Sentimental [X] Self-pity [_] Thesaurophilia [_] Use of internet shorthand or emoticons [_] Vicarious wish fulfilment Mediocrity score: 11
Re: “I’ll Drop You Off At The Next Corner” by Blindpoetry	7-Mar-04/11:06 AM
HARNESSE ALERT
Re: a comment on To Dark Angel by zagerXizer	6-Mar-04/5:04 AM
i think your comment was very hurtful, cant we just be friends ok im sorry bout wat happnd in da past n sumtimes the pain is just too much ~*X-tReMe Is NoT a MoOd, It'S a LYFE-STYLE!!!!!!*~
Re: a comment on youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569	5-Mar-04/1:41 PM
What are you talking about? Half the point in poemeranker is that everbody throws tantrums when their BS poetry gets slagged off.
Re: Not All Scars by coffeeangel316	5-Mar-04/1:35 PM
Often at night I wake up to sound of my own screams, and then I realise that I have just based my entire personality on my love for a hot beverage.
Re: Jesus Wept by coffeeangel316	5-Mar-04/1:26 PM
With this piece, you have balmilised a dumpling that is Beyond Thunderdome. It fails so utterly, that no amount constructive criticism could hoist it from the plunging U-bend to the giddy heights of a lingering death on the toilet bowl, smeared against the porcelain slopes like a squashed urchin. No my friend, this dropping is destined to remain below the waterline, where it shall wallow and sob in a state of appalling agony until the last days of its miserably short life are utterly spent. It's time to pull the chain and move on, lest the contemplation of one stool should hamper the coiling of t'other. Good try though! -10-
Re: a comment on Hi by fuzzylogicisatwat	5-Mar-04/1:19 PM
bow'ls
Re: a comment on Hair by ramtheman1	5-Mar-04/10:18 AM
What is a write? Is it like an invite to a swim meet?
Re: youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569	4-Mar-04/2:21 PM
This has to be a joke.
Re: a comment on No Sunday Clothes by wilco	4-Mar-04/5:34 AM
When the other boys didn't let you play with them, did mummy say you were special?
Re: No Sunday Clothes by wilco	3-Mar-04/3:29 PM
I'm afraid the idea of needing no Sunday clothes is plagiarised from my poeme 'Child of my Buttocks' (http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=20331). -10-