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Not All Scars (Limerick) by coffeeangel316
*Not All Scars Show* *Not All Wounds Heal* *Sometimes You Can't Always See* *The Pain Someone Feels* When we meet someone new not all scars truly shows We haven't walked a mile in their shoes to know about all of their flaws Sometimes we dig deeper because we care shining like a true friend showing them that we will be there for them until the true bitter end Life is short, and we try to make the best out of the hand we are dealt but scars will remain in our wake throughout the times of the pain we felt The truth is we need friends to give us hope being there when we need a shoulder to cry on helping us out of the dark with a long piece rope just being a true friend until are tears are gone

Up the ladder: college
Down the ladder: happy b'day maria

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11925
Posted: March 5, 2004 7:46 AM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2004 7:46 AM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.114 | 5-Mar-04/1:35 PM | Reply
Often at night I wake up to sound of my own screams, and then I realise that I have just based my entire personality on my love for a hot beverage.
[1] LilMsLadyPoet @ 152.163.100.135 | 11-Jul-05/9:02 AM | Reply
...someone gimme a rope...ugh...this was...uhm...keep writing...maybe time will do something.
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