| Re: Cutters Part II The Recut (Limerick Triplet) by Shardik |
2-Mar-04/2:28 PM |
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Well, at least you tried.
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| Re: paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined |
2-Mar-04/2:15 PM |
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What do you mean by 'deep'?
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| Re: a comment on Their Little Girl 2 by AskittlesK |
2-Mar-04/11:15 AM |
I wanted to point out the lamitude and lack of imagination in your title. After I'd done that, I became overwhelmed with a desire to see you mutilated and in agony. That's all.
Cheers mate!
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| Re: Looking Outside by etherealmaiden |
2-Mar-04/4:41 AM |
"The contemplation of Beauty sometimes induces ecstasy, and ecstasy is the happiest state, a humming perfection of the whole person. The greatest art critic of the earlier twentieth century, Bernard Berenson, writes in his Sketch for a Selfportrait that at the age of five or six he experienced an ecstasy when out of doors."
- from 'An Atheist's Values' by Richard Robinson, Fellow of Oriel College, Oxford
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| Re: Margaret Prays by wilco |
1-Mar-04/4:37 PM |
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I think Margret listened to Counting Crows too much and her brain was actually forced out of her ear.
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| Re: a comment on Drunk Satan by smlink84 |
1-Mar-04/6:00 AM |
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Your inability to produce worthwhile verse, or to make any insightful observation, is matched only by your inability to correctly write my name. It is spelled with two hyphens, two equals signs and an underscore. I went to the trouble of legally changing it, so you might as well get it right.
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| Re: Drunk Satan by smlink84 |
1-Mar-04/5:49 AM |
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I have a theological question for you, smlink84: Do angels have wings?
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| Re: a comment on Dream of a Vanilla Sky by smlink84 |
29-Feb-04/2:12 PM |
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I have thus far refrained from noting that your pen-name (minus 'z' and plus 'Ch') is 'Chodiac'. Do you think the non-alphanumeric characters in my name are somehow less important than the others? What is more, the whole fucking point of my name is to be the worst, most clichéd name possible. Next you'll be telling 'foothangingoutofass' that his name ends in 'ass'.
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| Re: a comment on Dream of a Vanilla Sky by smlink84 |
29-Feb-04/12:58 PM |
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So because some well-known, crappy film is released, this beautiful poeme has to be vandalised? Do you not see that by giving 'Vanilla Sky' a monopoly on the phrase 'Vanilla Sky' you are making a mere husk of a film, that would otherwise have been forgotten in the balms of mediocrity, into a mad, laughing urchin, bulging with far more influence than it deserves? How dare you.
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| Re: The Ghost of Sarah Gyllenhall by wilco |
28-Feb-04/1:17 PM |
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The Phantom of the Opera once gave me a hand shandy.
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| Re: Their Little Girl 2 by AskittlesK |
27-Feb-04/4:01 PM |
question... why did u put question... why did u put There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive.
on one of my poems... i wrote this poem myself.. i looked it up and yes there is a song called Don't Wanna Be Me but its not the same song.. not even close.. i just thought i'd tell you this...
on one of my poemes... do u not no that u can reply to a comment on the same page... i just thought i'd tell you this...
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| Re: a comment on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
27-Feb-04/3:11 AM |
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I don't know what you're talking about. I am fully aware that Jesus slaughtered Himself for me, and that I will be judged for my sins. But I attend a Church at least twice a week, and it is one of the largest, most prestigious Churches in the country. It is easily worthy of God's love, and it has one of the highest steeples I have ever seen. Church steeples were built to reach closer to God in Heaven, so the taller the better, since that way God is more likely to hear your prayers. It's not my soul I'm worried about, smlink84, since having spoken to God through the medium of prayer and spiritual revelation, I know He has plans for me in Heaven. You are the one I'm worried about. You who have seen fit to judge me on God's behalf. I will pray for you utterly.
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| Re: a comment on Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf |
26-Feb-04/12:06 PM |
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By that logic, ev'ry one of my poemes should be condensed into a single word: hope.
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| Re: Red by AskittlesK |
26-Feb-04/8:45 AM |
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Beautiful... simply beautiful.
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| Re: I don't wanna be me by AskittlesK |
26-Feb-04/4:56 AM |
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There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive.
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| Re: a comment on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Feb-04/12:17 PM |
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Yes! You should post another version of this poeme - its mathematical dual, if you will - describing the opposite affliction: constipation. Togeth'r, the two would become more pow'rful than you could possibly imagine, boldly encompassing the complete browne spectrum in a single, terrifying wipe.
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| Re: a comment on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Feb-04/12:15 PM |
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Yes! You should post another version of this poeme - it's mathematical dual - describing the opposite affliction: constipation. Togeth'r, the two would become more pow'rful than you could possibly imagine, boldly encompassing the entire browne spectrum in a single, terrifying wipe.
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| Re: a comment on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Feb-04/11:36 AM |
Alternate verse 3:
Summoned he all mann'r of priest,
But their holy tinctures
Ne'er could make the leaking cease,
Though they sooth'd his sphincter.
Balming ev'ry crack with myrrh
'hind his back they linger'd
Laughing at their King's demur:
"I will not be fi-ing-ger'd!"
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Feb-04/9:49 AM |
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| Re: Amateur excavators by darkshark |
25-Feb-04/6:15 AM |
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