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I don't wanna be me (Other) by AskittlesK
I don't wanna be me Lonely in the dark Inside my head. I don't wanna be this fuckin person Here thats been created. It took over me so that I don't wanna be me. It changed my inner self and voice It hurt me It hurt other people too I didn't mean to hurt him I didn't mean to hit her I don't wanna be me . Oh no Some one else please help Take over me Control me Be me I don't wanna be me No one deserves to be hurt by me No one should hurt me Lower my self confidence if you do I got nothin to live for. Why live To hurt myself some more Yeah No Fuck it all I'm headin to the door Not comin back to my hell hole I don't wanna be me

Up the ladder: chris (not finished yet)
Down the ladder: I Wonder If

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 12003
Posted: February 25, 2004 2:50 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2004 2:50 PM PST
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Comments:
[1] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 26-Feb-04/3:10 AM | Reply
Have you thought of setting this to music and having Rick Walla sing it?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 26-Feb-04/4:56 AM | Reply
There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive.
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