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Their Little Girl 2 (Free verse) by AskittlesK
You're their little girl out on your own tryin' to make it away from your home. You're their little girl but they don't know you But, it always ends up that all they wanna do is own you. You don't wanna show them who your really are 'cuz they won't understand, They never will, and never did. One day, you push them and they push you and you both push just a little to far... They can't tell your angry They can't see your sad. They don't know you want your independance. And when you try to fight for it, it drives you mad. Now, You try to tell them they don't own you but they don't know you , All they wanna do is control you. They want to run your life, They want to run your future They'll never let you be free it seems, Your caught in the puppet strings. You'll never be cut loose to make you own choices. Your whole life is based on what they want you to be, When all you want is to be free, They don't know the real me.

Up the ladder: Terrified
Down the ladder: Proposterosity

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10384
Posted: February 25, 2004 2:51 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2004 2:51 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239 | 27-Feb-04/4:01 PM | Reply
question... why did u put question... why did u put There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive.
on one of my poems... i wrote this poem myself.. i looked it up and yes there is a song called Don't Wanna Be Me but its not the same song.. not even close.. i just thought i'd tell you this...
on one of my poemes... do u not no that u can reply to a comment on the same page... i just thought i'd tell you this...
[n/a] AskittlesK @ 68.164.11.229 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 28-Feb-04/10:09 PM | Reply
o ! I didn't know that you could do that. I just joined poem ranker. So what did u mean by the comment you put on I don't wanna be me???
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239 > AskittlesK | 2-Mar-04/11:15 AM | Reply
I wanted to point out the lamitude and lack of imagination in your title. After I'd done that, I became overwhelmed with a desire to see you mutilated and in agony. That's all.

Cheers mate!
[n/a] AskittlesK @ 68.165.61.124 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 3-Mar-04/1:34 PM | Reply
well.. thanks! there is meaning in my title... I didn't try to make it that creative.. thats just what its about... basically Their Little Girl.. explains the poem.. 2 is because i found a poem my mom wrote.. i re wrote it and changed it but with the same meaning .. and called it 2 for it as being the next generation.. *me being her child*

thanks !
-Angie
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