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Their Little Girl 2 (Free verse) by AskittlesK

You're their little girl out on your own tryin' to make it away from your home. You're their little girl but they don't know you But, it always ends up that all they wanna do is own you. You don't wanna show them who your really are 'cuz they won't understand, They never will, and never did. One day, you push them and they push you and you both push just a little to far... They can't tell your angry They can't see your sad. They don't know you want your independance. And when you try to fight for it, it drives you mad. Now, You try to tell them they don't own you but they don't know you , All they wanna do is control you. They want to run your life, They want to run your future They'll never let you be free it seems, Your caught in the puppet strings. You'll never be cut loose to make you own choices. Your whole life is based on what they want you to be, When all you want is to be free, They don't know the real me.

AskittlesK 3-Mar-04/1:34 PM
well.. thanks! there is meaning in my title... I didn't try to make it that creative.. thats just what its about... basically Their Little Girl.. explains the poem.. 2 is because i found a poem my mom wrote.. i re wrote it and changed it but with the same meaning .. and called it 2 for it as being the next generation.. *me being her child*

thanks !
-Angie




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