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Red (Free verse) by AskittlesK
on my arm i always see red the color of blood the feeling of pain until I am done Red dripss on the floor beside my blood-stained bed Red the cuts on my arm from what I can see are always Red

Up the ladder: Poem on a face
Down the ladder: Impotently Informed

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7437
Posted: February 25, 2004 2:52 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2004 2:52 PM PST
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.114 | 26-Feb-04/8:45 AM | Reply
Beautiful... simply beautiful.
[7] richa @ 81.178.199.246 | 26-Feb-04/9:55 AM | Reply
In hell you will be made to face yourself. How you have made light of self-mutilation.
[0] leonxic @ 80.205.204.109 | 27-Feb-04/6:48 AM | Reply
You are a dumbass... simply a dumbass. You're most likely catholic as well.
[n/a] AskittlesK @ 68.164.11.229 > leonxic | 28-Feb-04/10:10 PM | Reply
why did you call me a dumbass?? I'm not catholic I don't participate in a religion.
-Angie
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