| Re: a comment on Upon the Battlefield by cleverdevice |
24-Feb-04/5:10 AM |
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On 13th Feb jasondingus credited 'your' poeme with an -10-. From 13th Feb to 23rd Feb you balmilised yourself in that -10-, basking in its splendour and revelling in the credit you took from it. Unless you can prove that you gain'd no pleasure from that vote before your admission of the 'borrowed' 1st verse on 23rd Feb, I'm afraid your jodhpurs will remain at half-mast. A belated admission of guilt simply will not do, since it is like stealing some money but only apologising after you have squander'd it on a vast collection of antique digital watches and Thundercats quilts. -10-
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| Re: a comment on Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey |
24-Feb-04/1:11 AM |
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| Re: Inevitable by _iamtwilight_ |
23-Feb-04/9:19 AM |
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Rewrite this from the perspective of a lobster. [8 marks]
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| Re: 4 walls by tralala42001 |
23-Feb-04/1:09 AM |
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and i coiled off a 25 pounder
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| Re: Windows and Mirrors by fire blade |
23-Feb-04/1:00 AM |
Delightfully inquisitive! -0-
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| Re: a comment on The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
23-Feb-04/12:52 AM |
In his master's steps he trod
Where the snow lay tinted;
Brown was in the very sod
O'er which the saint had grunted.
Therefore, Christian men, be sure,
Though your bow'l's compressing,
Ye who now step in ordure
Shall soon as well be me-e-ssing!!!!111!1
(Good King Brownceslas, trad.)
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| Re: The Niche by Fear of Garbage |
23-Feb-04/12:51 AM |
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A masterpiece from the "so incoherent it must be beautiful" school. -bow'ls-
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| Re: Gods Musician: Grave Digger by SupremeDreamer |
22-Feb-04/7:16 AM |
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I thought this was going to be a celebration of the 80s metal band 'Grave Digger'. Fuck you.
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| Re: a comment on Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/6:26 PM |
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A ha ha. My lad, you've never read 'Moby Dick'. You can never make it through the section where Captain Ahab is making love to the Thanksgiving squid in the pantry. Every time I've seen you try, you simply quietly close the book and then lock yourself in the bathroom, only to emerge an hour later covered in a chitinious shell made from some unutterable dried fluid.
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| Re: a comment on Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/5:46 PM |
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When you peel your jodhpurs off at night, do you light a candle and inhale deeply from the pleat?
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| Re: a comment on Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/4:44 PM |
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Do you talk in a stilted fantasy-novel fashion in real life?
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| Re: a comment on Monogamy by BrandonW |
21-Feb-04/3:01 PM |
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Beautiful. Simply... *weeps*
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
21-Feb-04/2:58 PM |
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I am quite knowledgeable about AIDS. You are not. I have a different set of doilies for each day of the week. You make do with a Burger King napkin. My father is a gentleman. I daresay you do not even know your father.
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| Re: a comment on Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/12:53 PM |
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
21-Feb-04/11:07 AM |
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What are you talking about? Only gay people can get the AIDS. Freddy Mercury was a gay and he got the AIDS. I think you're being very ignorant.
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| Re: Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/11:03 AM |
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This is a disastrous poeme. It fails utterly. You fail. -10-
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| Re: Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey |
21-Feb-04/10:57 AM |
Goodbye (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey
Maybe someday he'll find true love
Just know "sunshine" will be watching from above.
Angel (Free verse) by Butterfly1120
She to me is an angel.
One sent from up above.
Here to give, and not recieve,
someone with so much love.
The meaning of Love (Free verse) by The Slender Blade
What is this?
An angel in heaven?
No, this is love,
From the skies above.
Child of my Buttocks (Lyric) by -=Dark_Angel=-
For Jesu's legendary scorn
Is pitiful, and flawed by Love.
The greatest anguish from Above
Song For My Soulmate (Lyric) by John K
Have you ever seen to people madly in love?
They've been given a gift from their God above.
Forbidden Love (Ode) by crystal lane swift
I know He is watching from above,
Is our moment all a dream?
Why must this be a forbidden love?
Am I Good Enough? (Free verse) by crystal lane swift
I want nothing more than for you to return my love.
I write pretty lines for you about the heavens above.
An Angel (Lyric) by broken_wing11
An angel walked thru the gates today
Into His heavens up above
An angel has been blessed
She left us with her love
A.E.G. (Free verse) by nowhereman
How can you say you feel no love
for me, I hold you so high above
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| Re: The Angry Bush by wilco |
19-Feb-04/2:04 PM |
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I feel this could be improved by substituting the final line for one ending in 'eyes'.
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| Re: a comment on Freud suggested that I commit murder. by DreamerSupreme |
18-Feb-04/3:51 PM |
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There was no malfunction in that comment. It contains a recursive definition of all SupremeDreamer poemes.
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| Re: a comment on A History of Truth by Blue Magpie |
18-Feb-04/12:08 PM |
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That is a terrible thing to say. How dare you write about loving the truth whilst simultaneously soiling us in the balms of such a lie? Your claim that the Golden Tablets never existed is laughable, since The Book of Mormon, having been transcribed from said tablets, is irrefutable proof of their existence. You leave me no choice but to give your poeme a -0-
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