poemranker ::Inevitable by _iamtwilight_

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Free verse № 90977

Inevitable

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Feb 2004 · Edited 22 Feb 2004 · 3 comments

You graze your hand across my breasts but while your fingertips should melt my heart They only seem to burn my chest. I'm almost sure the changing winds replaced our love with negligence. Still everything remains the same, Each of us having the other to blame. I know you still love me, this is so hard to say So quickly my feelings are fading away. Our memories departing, your kisses replaced With suspended romance, such a bittersweet taste. We were together so long, it seems such a waste Why did my heart just stop feeling that way? Your defensive questions of why, where, and when Are making me feel guilty & spiteful, But I can't help but grin. I'm leaving, It's over, there's nothing here for me. Please tell everyone whatever you want, My reputation comes second when its up against love.

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[6] devina 21-Feb-04/4:01 AM Reply
Not bad...
[6] zodiac 23-Feb-04/9:03 AM Reply
<Sigh...>
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-Feb-04/9:19 AM Reply
Rewrite this from the perspective of a lobster. [8 marks]