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Inevitable (Free verse) by _iamtwilight_
You graze your hand across my breasts
but while your fingertips should melt my heart
They only seem to burn my chest.
I'm almost sure the changing winds
replaced our love with negligence.
Still everything remains the same,
Each of us having the other to blame.
I know you still love me, this is so hard to say
So quickly my feelings are fading away.
Our memories departing, your kisses replaced
With suspended romance, such a bittersweet taste.
We were together so long, it seems such a waste
Why did my heart just stop feeling that way?
Your defensive questions of why, where, and when
Are making me feel guilty & spiteful,
But I can't help but grin.
I'm leaving, It's over, there's nothing here for me.
Please tell everyone whatever you want,
My reputation comes second when its up against love.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11690
Posted: February 20, 2004 10:28 PM PST; Last modified: February 22, 2004 12:20 AM PST
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