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Goodbye (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey
Somebody once said that we only have one life to live. But now I have nothing left to give. I'm leaving tonight-- hoping that you all will be alright. As long as I stay, I'll be in your way. Always wanting more then I get. But NEVER sorry that we ever met. Maybe someday he'll find true love Just know "sunshine" will be watching from above. But that's alright, I'll be fine. Even knowing that he was never really mine.

Up the ladder: Fall Of The Heartlands
Down the ladder: the end of time

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Overall Rank: 1173
Posted: July 5, 2003 1:44 PM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2003 1:44 PM PDT
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[9] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jul-03/12:36 PM | Reply
A wonderful thought.
[7] lorigan85 @ 210.49.76.3 | 17-Jul-03/1:05 AM | Reply
short and sweet.
[3] EAger to Offend @ 204.225.154.253 | 18-Jul-03/2:14 PM | Reply
I'm sorry, but I just can't see through the sap. You can probably get a job with Hallmark, though. The sentiment is worthy of pursuit and I don't doubt that it comes from the heart. Just not my cup o' tea.
[n/a] Sunshine Conkey @ 65.221.202.101 | 21-Feb-04/9:52 AM | Reply
sorry to disappoint you but I'm still here. That and what kind of word is buggering?
[9] Shardik @ 24.130.214.180 > Sunshine Conkey | 21-Feb-04/12:48 PM | Reply
It's the kind of word that'll make you shave the goat and do a magical tit whistle before strapping yourelf to the goats underside for a bit of a running.
[1] lastobelus @ 80.132.178.218 | 21-Feb-04/10:11 AM | Reply
ick. passive aggressive faux-self-sacrificing whining. stay away.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.128.135.82 | 21-Feb-04/10:57 AM | Reply
Goodbye (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey
Maybe someday he'll find true love
Just know "sunshine" will be watching from above.

Angel (Free verse) by Butterfly1120
She to me is an angel.
One sent from up above.
Here to give, and not recieve,
someone with so much love.

The meaning of Love (Free verse) by The Slender Blade
What is this?
An angel in heaven?
No, this is love,
From the skies above.

Child of my Buttocks (Lyric) by -=Dark_Angel=-
For Jesu's legendary scorn
Is pitiful, and flawed by Love.
The greatest anguish from Above

Song For My Soulmate (Lyric) by John K
Have you ever seen to people madly in love?
They've been given a gift from their God above.

Forbidden Love (Ode) by crystal lane swift
I know He is watching from above,
Is our moment all a dream?
Why must this be a forbidden love?

Am I Good Enough? (Free verse) by crystal lane swift
I want nothing more than for you to return my love.
I write pretty lines for you about the heavens above.

An Angel (Lyric) by broken_wing11
An angel walked thru the gates today
Into His heavens up above
An angel has been blessed
She left us with her love

A.E.G. (Free verse) by nowhereman
How can you say you feel no love
for me, I hold you so high above
[9] Shardik @ 24.130.214.180 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 21-Feb-04/12:49 PM | Reply
Bow'ls
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > Shardik | 21-Feb-04/12:53 PM | Reply
lol
[n/a] Sunshine Conkey @ 216.67.195.23 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 24-Feb-04/12:33 AM | Reply
Do you have anything good to say to anyone?
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.114 > Sunshine Conkey | 24-Feb-04/1:11 AM | Reply
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