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Monogamy (Free verse) by BrandonW
Even now, its followed me
In the midst of a cloud of smoke
Objects scattered randomly - around
Also when I'm sound alseep
I feel it sitting on my chest
Cross-legged, twiddling its thumbs
Knowing I get no rest
Stuffiness is everywhere
And all eyes are upon me
I cannot look at them - because
I cannot look at myself
Looking back at a living lie
And knowing not of its depth
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Overall Rank: 9487
Posted: February 19, 2004 9:44 PM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2004 9:44 PM PST
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