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Monogamy (Free verse) by BrandonW
Even now, its followed me In the midst of a cloud of smoke Objects scattered randomly - around Also when I'm sound alseep I feel it sitting on my chest Cross-legged, twiddling its thumbs Knowing I get no rest Stuffiness is everywhere And all eyes are upon me I cannot look at them - because I cannot look at myself Looking back at a living lie And knowing not of its depth

Up the ladder: let me know
Down the ladder: Egg Roll

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9487
Posted: February 19, 2004 9:44 PM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2004 9:44 PM PST
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[8] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.130.214.180 | 20-Feb-04/9:19 PM | Reply
Mahogony
[n/a] BrandonW @ 172.166.98.67 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 21-Feb-04/2:42 PM | Reply
No, Monogamy.. Or the inability to be monogamous.. and the guilt that follows, the lie you create to forget and deny it, and not being able to face yourself.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > BrandonW | 21-Feb-04/3:01 PM | Reply
Beautiful. Simply... *weeps*
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.214.180 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 21-Feb-04/3:38 PM | Reply
A bit queer if you ask me?
[5] Lenore @ 64.252.98.210 | 22-Feb-04/7:41 PM | Reply
Straight to Hell Brandon...
Straight to HELL!! MUWAHAHAHhhahahahahah
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