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Can Predictions Be Proven? (Free verse) by peaceseeker
It was true - "The greater
the dissonance, the greater the
change!" And she changed
metaphorphosed this life. . .
from her center grew wings
translucent and invincible
to obstacles in her path.
"Where's your cocoon?"
asked the wide open night.
She shuddered in the chill
the cold rush of dissonance
created a blazing hot fire
that she harnessed to burn
and answered, "My cocoon still
exists and is invisible."
"Where are you rushing to?"
asked the wide open day.
Her cocoon fell to the floor
to reveal translucent skin
as he lifted her in the air
and entered her energetically.
"Was it cosmic or earthly?"
asked the spirit upon knocking.
It was this:
joy, pain, sunshine, rain and pride.
On a clear plateau of sensibility
his integrity painted her
a picture complete and enhanced
with hues of colors seen only
by their discerning eyes.
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Posted: November 17, 2004 4:25 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2004 7:39 AM PST
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Dissonance has to do with sounds.
Other vaguenesses follow.
It's a good image but lacks clarity.
i think you are referring to resonance.
What are you vague/unclear about?