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Hurtin' Once Again (Lyric) by faithmairee
Lord, you know that I've been hurtin'. Momma says it's growing pains. Lord, you know that I've been hurtin'. Momma says it's growing pains. Here I am a hurtin', yes, I'm hurtin' once again. Well, I've been down to the river. Lord, I went down there feelin' fine. Yes, I've down to the river. Lord, I went down there feelin' fine. But before I knew I knew it I was sittin' there a cryin'. Momma said it just ain't easy. Life's not always what it seems. Momma said it just ain't easy. Life's not always what it seems. She said, "You're just a poor girl with some crazy mixed-up dreams".

Up the ladder: free
Down the ladder: Fillamayer!

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9514
Posted: March 12, 2006 11:18 AM PST; Last modified: March 12, 2006 11:45 AM PST
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Comments:
[7] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 12-Mar-06/11:57 AM | Reply
Cool blues, although without the music it left me wanting more...and a little more innovation.
[n/a] faithmairee @ 209.240.205.63 > Ranger | 12-Mar-06/12:03 PM | Reply
Thanks for your comments. Agree...a song is much better with music!
[6] Fayt @ 141.157.35.222 | 13-Mar-06/8:38 AM | Reply
i agree completely with Ranger.
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