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Free verse № 135516

Your Words

Member since 2004 · Posted 19 Dec 2005 · 1 comment

You have never seen my tears You have never seen me cry I have tried so hard to ignore the pain But somehow it won’t go away I used to think that I could deny The pain you caused me Your words have stabbed my heart No matter what you say My dreams are always torn apart I have always hidden the pain from you But I can no longer control the tears I know you would only laugh in my face To reinforce my every fear

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[6] Dovina 19-Dec-05/4:31 PM Reply
Sounds like you have exaggerated what really happened by thinking about it in too much negativity. Would he really "laugh in my face To reinforce my every fear"?