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Your Words (Free verse) by TLRufener
You have never seen my tears You have never seen me cry I have tried so hard to ignore the pain But somehow it won’t go away I used to think that I could deny The pain you caused me Your words have stabbed my heart No matter what you say My dreams are always torn apart I have always hidden the pain from you But I can no longer control the tears I know you would only laugh in my face To reinforce my every fear

Down the ladder: Evening

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9500
Posted: December 19, 2005 10:09 AM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2005 10:09 AM PST
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[6] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 19-Dec-05/4:31 PM | Reply
Sounds like you have exaggerated what really happened by thinking about it in too much negativity. Would he really "laugh in my face To reinforce my every fear"?
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