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Evening (Free verse) by Enkidu In life's catastrophe
It is important to step lightly
and question nightly
Up the ladder:
Your Words
Down the ladder:
The wait
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Posted: March 10, 2005 11:40 AM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2005 11:40 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9501 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.6.133
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10-Mar-05/11:59 AM
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"life's" seems unneeded, and "nightly" seems not often enough for most catastrophes.
It's cute! I like.
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