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To Dark Angel (Lyric) by zagerXizer
I don't know anything about poetry so beats me if this style is correct. To Dark Angel First and foremost, I am not a poet, Just want you all to know it, My job is sitting in front of this node, To the Internet, writing my code. But I found a link to this site, And it prompted me to write: Dark Angel, I hope you know, You offer nothing to make lives grow, I could say you are better off dead, But is that really fair to the dead? This poem only took 5 minutes to write, And after reading it you know I'm right, Some things just have to be heard, No matter how sharp the word, So now I will return on my .NET way, And bid you all a good day.

Up the ladder: cornered invitation
Down the ladder: extacy

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3951
Posted: January 9, 2003 11:43 AM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2003 11:43 AM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.152 | 9-Jan-03/11:54 AM | Reply
you do that.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 9-Jan-03/12:10 PM | Reply
To Fool Or Knave:

Thy praise or dispraise is to me alike;
One doth not stroke me, nor the other strike.
[8] RGallet @ 140.186.47.110 | 9-Jan-03/12:29 PM | Reply
lol. asl?
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Jan-03/12:37 PM | Reply
Flyby. typical.
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.243.84 | 10-Dec-03/11:19 AM | Reply
I love the way you say this poeme took five minutes to write before you even reached the end.

As an end line I suggest this poem should be:

'it only took me 6 minutes to write, 6.02 now, damn 6.10....
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[10] PhSbLoNdE569 @ 205.188.208.105 | 5-Mar-04/4:19 PM | Reply
o yur my herO!!! i hate dark angel... she obviously knows nothin boutm poetry cuz she SUX ASS!!!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > PhSbLoNdE569 | 6-Mar-04/5:04 AM | Reply
i think your comment was very hurtful, cant we just be friends ok im sorry bout wat happnd in da past n sumtimes the pain is just too much ~*X-tReMe Is NoT a MoOd, It'S a LYFE-STYLE!!!!!!*~
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