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extacy (Free verse) by sir_heff
This Extacy gets the best of me I hope for the best of chi as I start to see the diffrences between you and me I eat the rest of my lie wait for the rest of my high as the feelings inside start up on this ride I'm up, then I'm down and i go all around I'm lost then i'm found am i on the ground? The feeling of a sound the sound of a sight the sight of a feeling it applies to your life Thats how it feels when you eat this pill thats why people will steal to get there fill but now i'm done i've had my fun i want some more but i'm fucking poor

Up the ladder: To Dark Angel
Down the ladder: No Mercy

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3952
Posted: January 17, 2003 7:09 AM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2003 7:09 AM PST
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[6] wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167 | 18-Jan-03/1:56 PM | Reply
You're a funny 16 year old. Spell check might help next time...then agian it doesn't seem to help me...6
[n/a] sir_heff @ 68.18.50.24 > wOrnella Mutiw | 18-Jan-03/11:05 PM | Reply
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