poemranker ::extacy by sir_heff

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Free verse № 36712

extacy

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Jan 2003 · 2 comments

This Extacy gets the best of me I hope for the best of chi as I start to see the diffrences between you and me I eat the rest of my lie wait for the rest of my high as the feelings inside start up on this ride I'm up, then I'm down and i go all around I'm lost then i'm found am i on the ground? The feeling of a sound the sound of a sight the sight of a feeling it applies to your life Thats how it feels when you eat this pill thats why people will steal to get there fill but now i'm done i've had my fun i want some more but i'm fucking poor

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[6] wOrnella Mutiw 18-Jan-03/1:56 PM Reply
You're a funny 16 year old. Spell check might help next time...then agian it doesn't seem to help me...6
[n/a] sir_heff › wOrnella Mutiw 18-Jan-03/11:05 PM Reply
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