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cornered invitation (Free verse) by daniella
come down to where we can quick thick of it.
i could waste some good enough tough lover on you.
roll over on top of where the mainstreet is bathed in red,
over where our love is so right and tonight
we could talk it under the surest way of going down under
over up into one and another.
empty out our clouds moist into eachother.
steep into a craziest moment
we could make it up.
sometimes just the finger sometimes a tongue.
as if them on the corner craned into our room
we standing up against the shadow on the wall
and i could pull you out and weave it back into me.
and taint the clean out of all of it to start
what we finish me into yours and suck it up
leaving them over there craning just to sense the nothing
they could share in what we spill over onto the floor.
just as i have so alike to have you leaning over me
rubbing it against where i opened up and again
see what we are when we sat down on what we become.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3950
Posted: August 3, 2002 6:43 PM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2002 10:48 PM PDT
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