| Re: a comment on Puritans by zodiac |
23-Mar-04/4:18 PM |
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No, you're not a "flaming bullshit poeser"; you're a "deep and meaningful poete" -10-
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| Re: a comment on where to go by AskittlesK |
23-Mar-04/4:10 PM |
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What does your heart tell you?
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| Re: Beah Richards by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Mar-04/3:53 PM |
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Well done Jeremi! Your poetry is really coming along now.
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| Re: Untitled *involves taking pills and cutting with razors* by AskittlesK |
21-Mar-04/3:43 PM |
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I'm sorry I was mean to you before. I guess we're pretty similar really. I've been cutting myself for three years how about you? I guess I like the feeling of power it gives me. I only wish others could see the pain inside. That's why I like poemranker people really understand here. Tell us your heart. xx
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| Re: a comment on Strange Days, Indeed by Bachus |
21-Mar-04/9:20 AM |
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No, they're right. He was sacked quite a while ago.
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| Re: a comment on Strange Days, Indeed by Bachus |
21-Mar-04/9:05 AM |
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Which former frontman of the Misfits?
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| Re: a comment on Puritans by zodiac |
21-Mar-04/3:01 AM |
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'Bowl' doesn't rhyme with 'pull'. Check and mate.
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| Re: Puritans by zodiac |
20-Mar-04/4:48 PM |
Mediocrity code: 20841404
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| Re: I am by Sapphire2589 |
20-Mar-04/4:42 PM |
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| Re: Snow Day by Standby |
20-Mar-04/4:37 PM |
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Are you sure you didn't see yourself, someone should fuck your shit up for writing this.
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| Re: Senseless Murder by Sapphire2589 |
20-Mar-04/12:00 PM |
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Linkin Park lyrics + ellipses = GREAT POETRY!!!!!!! 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: Dying Harvest by Richard |
19-Mar-04/3:58 AM |
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lolin all da way 2 da bank! nobut seriizly gud job :P) -10-
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| Re: a comment on Fly by etherealmaiden |
18-Mar-04/3:08 PM |
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You'll get mainly rudeness on poemeranker. Rudeness and shit poetry. Rudeness, shit poetry and clog-dancing dunces who waste their time writing sarcastic replies to other people's comments. -10-
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| Re: New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco |
18-Mar-04/12:00 PM |
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I like the way you have used arbitrary line breaks to turn ordinary prose into stilted poetry.
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| Re: I think of you by singinkygal |
16-Mar-04/2:06 PM |
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Great use of 'die' to rhyme with 'cry'!!!!!1111 -10-
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| Re: a comment on My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 |
16-Mar-04/1:28 PM |
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Don't listen to them Jeremi, I think your poetry is beautiful and amazing. You have a pure soul of crimson dragonsfyre. -10-
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| Re: a comment on My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 |
16-Mar-04/7:06 AM |
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P.S Congratulations on your use of 'pure' and 'stark' imagery. Before writing Juno's Peacock, did you think to yourself: "Yes, I want all my imagery to be pure and stark"? Good Christ I hope so.
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| Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 |
16-Mar-04/6:59 AM |
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"Jeremi Britt Handrinos' first collection delivers an exemplary paradox of the authenticity of life lived put into words. He toys with conventional forms like a magician and throws off the surrogate voices of the past with his own pure and stark imagery. Bold, free, raucous at times, Handrinos splits the mundane, as sudden as a cut on the finger then leaves you to taste your own blood." -10-
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| Re: dear jim d. by peaceseeker |
14-Mar-04/2:50 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld |
14-Mar-04/5:47 AM |
Exercises
1. Read -=Dark_Angel=-'s poeme 'Voyage of the Browne'. Compare and contrast. How does each poeme make you feel? [5]
2. "Drugs are cool and if you don't take them your gay". Discuss. [4]
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