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Senseless Murder (Free verse) by Sapphire2589 knife cutting into soft skin.....blood....screams
of terror...tears of pain....not wanting to die....
needing to live...explosions of pain....a fragile soul
caught in the hands of fate....an evil face....police arrive..
..hang on they tell you....hear the ambulance coming...wanting the pain
to end.....slipping into darkness....feeling a wave of calm sweeping
over you...gone....
Senseless Murder
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Posted: March 20, 2004 12:06 AM PST; Last modified: March 20, 2004 12:06 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4417 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159
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20-Mar-04/12:00 PM
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Linkin Park lyrics + ellipses = GREAT POETRY!!!!!!! 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Needs better research. I am not believing the murder thingy
what do you mean "research"?and what do you mean "i am not believing the murder thingy"?i appreciate your comment but it dosent make sense
What do you mean "senseless"? Surely if someone cares enough to kill you they must be very sensitive.
Unless it's Dark Angel. Insensitive bastard.
it means pointless
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