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Senseless Murder

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Mar 2004 · 6 comments

knife cutting into soft skin.....blood....screams of terror...tears of pain....not wanting to die.... needing to live...explosions of pain....a fragile soul caught in the hands of fate....an evil face....police arrive.. ..hang on they tell you....hear the ambulance coming...wanting the pain to end.....slipping into darkness....feeling a wave of calm sweeping over you...gone.... Senseless Murder

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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Mar-04/12:00 PM Reply

Linkin Park lyrics + ellipses = GREAT POETRY!!!!!!! 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[7] richa 20-Mar-04/4:09 PM Reply

Needs better research. I am not believing the murder thingy

[n/a] Sapphire2589 › richa 20-Mar-04/4:36 PM Reply

what do you mean "research"?and what do you mean "i am not believing the murder thingy"?i appreciate your comment but it dosent make sense

[10] poemwanker › Sapphire2589 22-Mar-04/8:09 AM Reply

What do you mean "senseless"? Surely if someone cares enough to kill you they must be very sensitive.
Unless it's Dark Angel. Insensitive bastard.

[n/a] Sapphire2589 › poemwanker 22-Mar-04/8:05 PM Reply

it means pointless

[10] poemwanker 22-Mar-04/8:09 AM Reply

10.