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Senseless Murder (Free verse) by Sapphire2589

knife cutting into soft skin.....blood....screams of terror...tears of pain....not wanting to die.... needing to live...explosions of pain....a fragile soul caught in the hands of fate....an evil face....police arrive.. ..hang on they tell you....hear the ambulance coming...wanting the pain to end.....slipping into darkness....feeling a wave of calm sweeping over you...gone.... Senseless Murder

Sapphire2589 20-Mar-04/4:36 PM
what do you mean "research"?and what do you mean "i am not believing the murder thingy"?i appreciate your comment but it dosent make sense




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