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I think of you (Free verse) by singinkygal
What do I do when I want to smile but all I can do is cry I think of you What do I do when I'm alone for a while and I miss you so much I could die I think of you What do I do when I know that you are miles away and I would give anything just to hold you I think of you What do I do when I have doubt and can't say anything to make it go away I remember that there is you and then I think of us

Up the ladder: sure did
Down the ladder: Once they were gliders.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5434
Posted: March 15, 2004 4:37 PM PST; Last modified: March 15, 2004 4:37 PM PST
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[7] zodiac @ 152.18.129.57 | 15-Mar-04/4:59 PM | Reply
I read your username as Sin-Gin-KY[Jelly]-Gal. I would strongly recommend rewriting this poem with one of those images/topics as a central figure - a leitmotif, if you will. By the way, leitmotif is your word for the day. Have a nice one. -7-
[7] deleted user @ 172.175.160.57 | 16-Mar-04/10:40 AM | Reply
A nice heartfelt piece. I enjoyed the opening line especially.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.114 | 16-Mar-04/2:06 PM | Reply
Great use of 'die' to rhyme with 'cry'!!!!!1111 -10-
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