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Try, Please Try (Free verse) by Spindle
Waving your arm takes so much energy
Almost as much as it takes me to smile
You make me so miserable when you donât even try
It frightens me to think what you'd accomplish if you did
But you wonât, so thereâs really no need to stressâ¦..
Unless, no, your dignity wouldnât allow it
Your self-centeredness is so strong, your indifference so rock-solid
That making an effort is a physical impossibility
I know you donât mean it, and maybe thatâs the worst part
Maybe if you did I could move on
Instead Iâm stuck
Trapped
Caught on a never halting pendulum
With only your moods as an axis
.......I love you.......
...I guess itâs my fault...
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5414
Posted: March 29, 2004 4:27 PM PST; Last modified: March 29, 2004 4:27 PM PST
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