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I think of you (Free verse) by singinkygal

What do I do when I want to smile but all I can do is cry I think of you What do I do when I'm alone for a while and I miss you so much I could die I think of you What do I do when I know that you are miles away and I would give anything just to hold you I think of you What do I do when I have doubt and can't say anything to make it go away I remember that there is you and then I think of us

zodiac 15-Mar-04/4:59 PM
I read your username as Sin-Gin-KY[Jelly]-Gal. I would strongly recommend rewriting this poem with one of those images/topics as a central figure - a leitmotif, if you will. By the way, leitmotif is your word for the day. Have a nice one. -7-




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