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I think of you (Free verse) by singinkygal

What do I do when I want to smile but all I can do is cry I think of you What do I do when I'm alone for a while and I miss you so much I could die I think of you What do I do when I know that you are miles away and I would give anything just to hold you I think of you What do I do when I have doubt and can't say anything to make it go away I remember that there is you and then I think of us

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 16-Mar-04/2:06 PM
Great use of 'die' to rhyme with 'cry'!!!!!1111 -10-




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