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The Destination of the Unborn Child

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Mar 2004 · Edited 11 Mar 2004 · 5 comments

For the Mother and Father get intimate They do many drugs It's a load of shit She tokes, he drinks She smokes, and he pops some so called pescription pills Destination of this child Will be bad He'll never have a life That he should have had Because once he's born that kid will die And thats the results of he's parents loving ways They never really cared, They were never really there Did they even know how it would affect him? For every bad choice, and every little mistake We know know the little boys fate

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[n/a] Shuushin 12-Mar-04/11:52 AM Reply

Title rocks.

[n/a] DeadtotheWorld › Shuushin 12-Mar-04/7:49 PM Reply

Thanks man, by the way your poetry is awesome.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › DeadtotheWorld 14-Mar-04/5:47 AM Reply

Exercises

1. Read -=Dark_Angel=-'s poeme 'Voyage of the Browne'. Compare and contrast. How does each poeme make you feel? [5]

2. "Drugs are cool and if you don't take them your gay". Discuss. [4]

[8] richa › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Mar-04/6:05 AM Reply

I believe we are all born gay, and must partake in manly activities to prove ourself not.

Also vis a vis the poeme, I suggest the term toke was invented by a rapper because it rhymed with smoke.

[n/a] zodiac › richa 14-Mar-04/6:17 AM Reply

I suggest that the preceding comment by richa is the Unified Theory of Everything so long sought by physicists, except for the toke part, which is utterly false.