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Dying Harvest (Free verse) by Richard
How will the soft flawless Rose Smell like fragrant Summer Now that this season of sad Love is over A soft whisper to obey never lied, Whereas the pure angel spouted abuse We burn in need- Yet our tragic flame is only a tendril Like a cold kiss from a shadowy face. Remember my broken smile and kiss me. The dream of Love lingers with morning Then with day are the heart and romance suffocated Bruised- Love could not last

Up the ladder: end of era
Down the ladder: i hung that page to dry

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3540
Posted: March 18, 2004 11:44 PM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2004 11:44 PM PST
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 19-Mar-04/3:58 AM | Reply
lolin all da way 2 da bank! nobut seriizly gud job :P) -10-
[10] Standby @ 205.188.116.149 | 19-Mar-04/9:03 PM | Reply
Nice poem.
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