Re: Herencia Latina by Ranger	6-Jun-06/10:30 AM
Ranger, this is wonderful. A riddle poem, I must say. If it wasn't for Imp's insight I was getting quite distracted by Dovina's ideas, wondering what in the world could you be so precisely explaining. Am not familiar with viole, is it to do with a shade of violet? Am clueless.
Re: End by MacFrantic	18-Jun-06/10:55 PM
I fell that this could be an excerpt from a story. somehow it gives me an eerie feeling. I don't particularly like death themes esp when settled around brutality.
Re: Field Of Surnames by Caducus	18-Jun-06/11:04 PM
Somehow I get the feeling of being in a cemetary.
Re: The Last of The Winds by emilyowey	18-Jun-06/11:07 PM
Its a nice idea but ends in being an okay-okay poem.
Re: The Runt by Caducus	18-Jun-06/11:11 PM
Cool. Whether real or not, the choice of topic is good. It's like you've put a story to it. Great job.
Re: My Ideals by Miggy	18-Jun-06/11:14 PM
This is a good. .................And to see that none have voted here yet?
Re: A Love Potion by forsaken	18-Jun-06/11:18 PM
A nice title. And a good read. But there seems to be no consistencey in time and metre and its as if some lines are like chewing gum. They've been pulled and stretched.
Re: Be The One by forsaken	18-Jun-06/11:20 PM
Looks like you're a loser at love that you're poems are written to beckon someone in particular. It doesn't seem that you've got her. (No offence meant).
Re: If I Had by forsaken	18-Jun-06/11:21 PM
There you go again.
Re: slice of moonlight by lmp	19-Jun-06/8:10 AM
Beautiful.... This got straight to my heart.
Re: Money Back by drnick	22-Jun-06/10:49 PM
Hmmmmm. I like the last two lines that sum up the first six lines . Other than that I ain't relating much to it although I get the scene. Sorry to disappoint.
Re: A Little War Victim by amanda_dcosta	25-Jun-06/9:19 AM
Thanks Al. As for the last lines... it merely means.... come and take me away lest I'm history.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jun-06/8:39 AM
It's a nice setting.... one that got me thinking. My kids often play with toy guns and I think from now on,watching my kids play, what's going to play on my mind is this..... somewhere, somebody will never become old due to probably my encouraging my kids to becoming so insensitive to violence and war. I think I need to do something about it, in my own way.
Re: A Little War Victim by amanda_dcosta	26-Jun-06/8:46 AM
I read this out to my five year old and the first thing he says after I read it is... "what is her name?" Would anyone like to do the honors and name this unfortunate nameless child of my poem?
Re: comfort by the indign	30-Jun-06/8:42 AM
This is pretty good. I would also like it if you'd use upper case letter whereever necessary. I like the theme you chose and how you've presented it.
Re: Lovers east of the Coombe by Caducus	30-Jun-06/9:20 AM
Lovely imagery.
Re: Fallen Charub by Dovina	30-Jun-06/10:49 AM
ha ha ha ha... sorry but don't get me wrong. I'm laughing all over.
Re: Patio 95 by ecargo	1-Jul-06/3:47 AM
e-cargo... where have you been? I missed seeing you on PR. Good to see you around here now.... so howz life been and what's new other than this poem.
Re: canada day by Bill Z Bub	1-Jul-06/5:52 AM
not very impressive to me.
Re: Songs of the hedge bird by ALChemy	3-Jul-06/7:13 AM
All I can say Al, is that it's beautiful.