poemranker ::Fallen Charub by Dovina

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Free verse № 144224

Fallen Charub

by Dovina

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Jun 2006 · Edited 30 Jun 2006 · 6 comments

I am his goddess She’s his angel A little fallen angel, if you ask me Goddess is work I want to be his angel Even a fallen angel Or naughty cherub But never a dark angel

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6 comments

[10] amanda_dcosta 30-Jun-06/10:49 AM Reply
ha ha ha ha... sorry but don't get me wrong. I'm laughing all over.
[10] ALChemy 30-Jun-06/10:53 AM Reply
2 dozen roses mailed to the address of Dovina Goddess of the Grey-blue ocean of poetry.
[9] Ranger 1-Jul-06/12:16 AM Reply
Heh... another early chuckle. You guys have the humour going today, don't you?
[10] amanda_dcosta › Ranger 1-Jul-06/2:02 AM Reply
Ranger.... if you're lucky to join in when we do ... we could double date.
[n/a] Dovina › amanda_dcosta 1-Jul-06/12:39 PM Reply
When two dandies date a dame,
this is what I call a dandy dating dream.

When two dames date a dandy,
this is what I call a doggie dragout drudge.

When two dandies date two dames,
this is what I call a double doctor dandy dating duo.
[10] amanda_dcosta › Dovina 1-Jul-06/6:54 PM Reply
Dovina..... you def are in form!