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Free verse № 144150

comfort

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 Jun 2006 · 1 comment

this is where the comfort grows, blossoms into something new. the beauty of the princess smile beaming, shining, calming, soothes, makes bright the stormy, darkening night and shares a perfect warmth. a whole new world hides behind a veil that only love can lift; masks a realm of wonderment that can be found only together. takes a wonder, builds a dream, gives all the world away; hold out your hands and you may hold this perfect jubilant.

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[8] amanda_dcosta 30-Jun-06/8:42 AM Reply
This is pretty good. I would also like it if you'd use upper case letter whereever necessary. I like the theme you chose and how you've presented it.