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Stay With Me (Free verse) by FadedHappiness
When I fall Would you catch me? Or still be standing there watching me? I dont know where im going to land Or when I'am going too stop falling It seems that im continuesly falling away when your gone So dont leave me baby Stay here always Hold me forever and say you will always be here I reached up for the sun But it seems I landed in the shade Will you be under that tree with me? Or heading up to the sun away Please tell me That you will always be with me No matter how tough it may be' Stay in the shade with me

Up the ladder: do be do wop bob
Down the ladder: Counsel

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5952
Posted: August 30, 2004 3:42 PM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2004 3:42 PM PDT
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[9] ForgottenSoul17 @ 216.76.238.226 | 30-Aug-04/3:45 PM | Reply
*9* its okay..
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