poemranker ::Stay With Me by FadedHappiness

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Stay With Me

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Aug 2004 · 1 comment

When I fall Would you catch me? Or still be standing there watching me? I dont know where im going to land Or when I'am going too stop falling It seems that im continuesly falling away when your gone So dont leave me baby Stay here always Hold me forever and say you will always be here I reached up for the sun But it seems I landed in the shade Will you be under that tree with me? Or heading up to the sun away Please tell me That you will always be with me No matter how tough it may be' Stay in the shade with me

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[9] ForgottenSoul17 30-Aug-04/3:45 PM Reply
*9* its okay..