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Eye's Upon Tomorrow's Night (Free verse) by Enkidu
Cast light at strange angles to see tricks easily
Uncover simple games
Enliven the deadest of trees with imagination
Reanimate nature's regrets
With hands of a forgotten
Embittered magician
For here lies the spoken life
More private in conviction
Than all the throes of a bashful schoolgirl's affections
To him the world was just that
And she was in it
So unhappy the orator drones
What buried notion soils the grave
No figure awakened
Could reinvent such fabulous distraction
From the dying we insist
Should be called living
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5871
Posted: September 9, 2007 7:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2007 7:08 PM PDT
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