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comfort (Free verse) by the indign

this is where the comfort grows, blossoms into something new. the beauty of the princess smile beaming, shining, calming, soothes, makes bright the stormy, darkening night and shares a perfect warmth. a whole new world hides behind a veil that only love can lift; masks a realm of wonderment that can be found only together. takes a wonder, builds a dream, gives all the world away; hold out your hands and you may hold this perfect jubilant.

amanda_dcosta 30-Jun-06/8:42 AM
This is pretty good. I would also like it if you'd use upper case letter whereever necessary. I like the theme you chose and how you've presented it.




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