replying on Help! by Dovina
14 Sep 2011, 12:07 PM
Classy enough to call it a haiku?
on Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta
23 Apr 2011, 8:44 PM
Even with unlimited power, he had emotion, compassion. Hard to beat that.
on Song of Creation by amanda_dcosta
23 Apr 2011, 8:42 PM
Appropriate to use the musical descriptions, since the old church, emerging from plainsong, invented them for church music. Can't escape that music emerged from worship, is part of it, always has been
on That man looks so familiar by A. Nomaly
12 Feb 2011, 8:13 PM
best in the last ten posted :)
on My Brain by T. Jonathron Remp
12 Feb 2011, 8:12 PM
hehe
on Self-Inflicted Wounds by wilco
12 Feb 2011, 8:11 PM
You used to be better than this. What the hell's gone wrong?
on tree in a flood by Skamper
12 Feb 2011, 8:07 PM
Hey, settle down, its all too fast. Delayed gratification. Yes, please, make it last!
on Best friends by amanda_dcosta
16 Nov 2010, 10:14 AM
Sounds like the mother of a good son or the memory of a child with a good brother
on driftwood by ThePariahDog
11 Oct 2010, 12:33 AM
I remember the ancient times when, if memory presents truth, you were young and wrote young. Now this is good, shrouded just enough. Poemranker is abandoned now, all hands jumped ship. It must leave an able seaman wondering why he signed on.
on white whale by ThePariahDog
1 Aug 2010, 5:56 PM
Some people think that Moby Dick is about a man after a whale. Im glad to see that you see more than that in it.
on puppy love by Freethinker1602
1 Aug 2010, 5:54 PM
Its the way it goes when you feed a poor dog. He almost always goes bock to his self-pity wallow.
replying on Poemranker is Back! by Dovina
1 Aug 2010, 5:48 PM
Thanks Kaolin
on Chasing Droplets by dinah
1 Aug 2010, 5:47 PM
it seems strange that anyone, even you, could give "any gift in the world." Gifts seem more like the special traits that make each of us unique. Yet I fee the captivity of it.
on Holy Spirit - A Tanka Poem by amanda_dcosta
1 Aug 2010, 5:44 PM
Englsish tanka does not have to harness itself to 57577, but here you do it without feeling harnessed. The only exception might be that "delight" and "pleasure" are about the same.
on Gerry's Song by ALChemy
29 Mar 2010, 4:54 PM
After all those voyages, rollin' on the sea, my laddie comes sailin' back to me. Was it with she or with he, he'd rather be? In India or California? No matter, long as my laddie's commin' back to me.
on February by half.italian
1 Feb 2010, 4:35 PM
why not when it was cold? is love when you want it or is it good all the time?
replying on Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina
1 Feb 2010, 4:33 PM
Sure I can.
You depart asa thunderstorm
having acracked and aboomed over a head and under a ground acarried off
by cool breath of a God
You waken seeds
tender, brave sprouts
feeling the sky for a twist of a updraft
overshadow of acloud
happy to ablige
You depart asa thunderstorm
having acracked and aboomed over a head and under a ground acarried off
by cool breath of a God
You waken seeds
tender, brave sprouts
feeling the sky for a twist of a updraft
overshadow of acloud
happy to ablige
on Dovina by Prince of Void
3 Oct 2009, 5:06 PM
Swoon!