why not when it was cold? is love when you want it or is it good all the time?

Thanks for responding. :)

ok...It was just a simple point in time type thing, but I see where you are going.

What type of payoff do you generally look for in a poem?

I guess I was only trying to convey a feeling. Nothing more. I see that it could seem "incomplete" for some people.

I'll see if I can expand on it.

Have you submitted anything recently? This site needs some tlc from poem makers.

this is just not written well