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February (Free verse) by half.italian
Winter breaks and my love is fresh. In the chill of the wind she poses, beautiful in her wool layers. With a kiss, we warm.

Down the ladder: Broken Free

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8798
Posted: January 24, 2010 8:08 PM PST; Last modified: January 24, 2010 8:38 PM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 68.183.149.64 | 1-Feb-10/4:35 PM | Reply
why not when it was cold? is love when you want it or is it good all the time?
[n/a] half.italian @ 75.82.193.144 | 1-Feb-10/10:03 PM | Reply
Thanks for responding. :)

ok...It was just a simple point in time type thing, but I see where you are going.

What type of payoff do you generally look for in a poem?

I guess I was only trying to convey a feeling. Nothing more. I see that it could seem "incomplete" for some people.

I'll see if I can expand on it.

Have you submitted anything recently? This site needs some tlc from poem makers.
[1] daniella @ ::1 | 14-Sep-14/6:25 PM | Reply
this is just not written well
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