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February (Free verse) by half.italian

Winter breaks and my love is fresh. In the chill of the wind she poses, beautiful in her wool layers. With a kiss, we warm.

half.italian 1-Feb-10/10:03 PM
Thanks for responding. :)

ok...It was just a simple point in time type thing, but I see where you are going.

What type of payoff do you generally look for in a poem?

I guess I was only trying to convey a feeling. Nothing more. I see that it could seem "incomplete" for some people.

I'll see if I can expand on it.

Have you submitted anything recently? This site needs some tlc from poem makers.




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