Re: a comment on no title by Dovina	3-Oct-09/5:04 PM
Good day, fair Prince. Long nights and cold have I endured here in the tower. They no longer pass, those friendly voices, those noble horsemen with whom I consorted in their passing. But now thou hast called to me, and thy words are fresh and comely. How I wish for their return and your staying comfort. For the way it was, I long. And that the void were not so broad.
Re: quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog	11-Jun-09/7:46 PM
Wish I knew the legend, some good lines
Re: a comment on in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined	15-Feb-09/11:40 AM
True, but iphone wont help, I think. It's still the best constructed poetry site on the internet
Re: The PROJECT by Sigh'ense...	21-Jan-09/3:59 PM
Down where I don't live, but can feel it, nicely done
Re: The flute sound makes me blue by Prince of Void	21-Jan-09/3:57 PM
blue somber flute, bright bird-like flute. I like baroque flute best. breathy and down - flute. nice
Re: Gladly For Love by sliver	5-Jan-09/5:51 PM
I figured it a love letter to someone you know and was about to suggest handwriting and sending, until the last verse.
Re: Snorting the Cosmic Dust. by DreamerSupreme	5-Jan-09/5:27 PM
Like it even though it preaches like the preacher it condemns. “Jesus saw redemption . . . suicide or the cleansing of sin” interesting line “Keep thy eyes forward” That’s “thine” but mixing vintage is a sin
Re: Back to reality by Prince of Void	5-Jan-09/5:17 PM
Swimming to the end of the ocean is a great way to go. Like riding a bicycle day after day until . . .
Re: the invisible beauty by Prince of Void	5-Jan-09/5:14 PM
Thank you, I take it personally behind my fake face, for there I am beautiful
Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer	5-Jan-09/5:07 PM
I write bad poetry and procrastinate my death. Yawn.
Re: a comment on To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer	5-Jan-09/5:01 PM
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=80113
Re: Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac	16-Dec-08/5:15 PM
Rising in a dust cloud, are you? http://antwrp.gsfc.nasa.gov/apod/ap081214.html
Re: a comment on Twilight of the Mind by Liam Wallace	23-Nov-08/5:25 PM
I sat in the same shelter if it's in Shenandoah National Park or near the south boundary - great country and Trail Days in Damascus, Virginia was a hoot. I remember most hearing heavy footsteps outside the tent at midnight. Good poem,nice recollections
Re: Anorexia is good for the soul by hobojo	12-Nov-08/1:59 PM
Well not quite. Relate it to a mood or a rash, not to anorexia - that's a disease
Re: i will if i want to by malpaso	12-Nov-08/1:57 PM
Wonderful
Re: Fine Line by sliver	12-Nov-08/1:57 PM
Well put. We get pulled back to mama's knee and mama's beliefs, like a magnet too strong for reason.
Re: a comment on Voice of the World by Dovina	12-Nov-08/12:32 PM
If your first paragraph is correct then nothing existed before the universe. If you say no, the universe emerged; then you include whatever it emerged from in a new definition of the universe. You go beyond Stephen Hawking when he says we can never know what existed before the Bang. You say “The properties of the Universe are what determine the Laws and Initial Conditions.” John Fowles asks, “What is easier to believe? That there was always something or that there was once nothing?” Not that the easier thing to believe is more likely true, but the more reasonable thing is. A Model is like a worldview; a framework for testing predictions, an adjustable framework. Blaise Pascal, mathematician in the seventeenth century was testing the wager: Is it reasonable to believe in God. Either God exists or he does not, and we cannot use reason to determine which alternative is true. However, our lives may be affected by the alternative we choose. Since choosing to believe that God exists may lead to greater overall happiness, and nothing is lost if we are wrong, Pascal decided it is better to accept the theistic alternative. Since then, science has revealed much. I think that between then and now, it has pulled more in the direction of god than no-god.
Re: One of the guys by hobojo	1-Nov-08/3:27 PM
This leaves me wondering about several things, and not getting it. Tell me what is wrong with falling in love with a friend, one of the guys or not. Was he really a friend if he did this? What kind of judge of character are you?
Re: Phoenix by Celticai	1-Nov-08/3:20 PM
Your rebirth is waiting on a lone mountain trail where wanderers like us go to flush the plaque from our arteries and the smoke from our brains. Try it.
Re: WHAT PEOPLE DO by OMOMOMOM	1-Nov-08/3:17 PM
The first 4 lines open a fine stage to play on. The last 2 lines wrap it up just fine. But whatever falls between needs some major tuning.