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Back to reality (Free verse) by Prince of Void
Out of love tears My heart floats down Streaming down On the cold wasteland I'm wandering along for you Back to reality My life was littered with abandoned verses Stir in my headaches And my thoughts Made of sleeping pills That it brought me this life Of old meanings It's like running nose Then something reminds of me It's not killing me Every night the same dream I'm walking along the backlit streets And I'm going to the headlights of cars That I might last the night Then I'll hail the dawn Waiting down on the shore On my last attempt to see To feel just how I could swim To the end of the ocean

Up the ladder: Rain
Down the ladder: Bumper Crop

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6144
Posted: January 3, 2009 8:57 AM PST; Last modified: January 3, 2009 8:57 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 208.127.228.52 | 5-Jan-09/5:17 PM | Reply
Swimming to the end of the ocean is a great way to go. Like riding a bicycle day after day until . . .
[7] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 5-Mar-09/10:31 PM | Reply
the edge of the ocean is just another's hell. or heaven we'd all get kicked out of. but it's nice to imagine?
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