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I'll start

Member since 2001 · Posted 13 Nov 2020 · 6 comments

I'll start. Again. I'll start reaching out. I'll start reaching out through backlit screen grasping at what might become some future might have been— The lights go out and back again. I'll start reaching out. Again. I'll start.

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6 comments

[n/a] impert&ent 15-Nov-20/10:40 AM Reply
Crank up the old motor
[7] Dovina 19-Nov-20/11:59 AM Reply
grasping at what might become
some future might have been—

great lines of hope and practical too.
[7] Dovina 19-Nov-20/12:01 PM Reply
adding comments always goes to the error box. Please fix this.
[n/a] nentwined › Dovina 2-Dec-20/10:21 AM Reply
ARGH. Yes. Yes, right.
[n/a] nentwined › Dovina 2-Dec-20/10:27 AM Reply
Maybe fixed?

https://stackoverflow.com/questions/8186395/noclassdeffounderror-javax-activation-datasource

javax.activation was removed from Java9 forwards, so I had to include it manually.
[7] Dovina › nentwined 2-Dec-20/11:09 AM Reply
Thank you, I believe it is fixed.

Now, if only if only a tweak of their software would awaken the sleepers.