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I'll start (Free verse) by nentwined
I'll start. Again. I'll start reaching out. I'll start reaching out through backlit screen grasping at what might become some future might have been— The lights go out and back again. I'll start reaching out. Again. I'll start.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6122
Posted: November 13, 2020 1:37 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2020 1:37 PM PST
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[n/a] impert&ent @ 127.0.0.1 | 15-Nov-20/10:40 AM | Reply
Crank up the old motor
[7] Dovina @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 19-Nov-20/11:59 AM | Reply
grasping at what might become
some future might have been—

great lines of hope and practical too.
[7] Dovina @ 127.0.0.1 | 19-Nov-20/12:01 PM | Reply
adding comments always goes to the error box. Please fix this.
[n/a] nentwined @ 127.0.0.1 > Dovina | 2-Dec-20/10:21 AM | Reply
ARGH. Yes. Yes, right.
[n/a] nentwined @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 > Dovina | 2-Dec-20/10:27 AM | Reply
Maybe fixed?

https://stackoverflow.com/questions/8186395/noclassdeffounderror-javax-activation-datasource

javax.activation was removed from Java9 forwards, so I had to include it manually.
[7] Dovina @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 > nentwined | 2-Dec-20/11:09 AM | Reply
Thank you, I believe it is fixed.

Now, if only if only a tweak of their software would awaken the sleepers.
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