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The flute sound makes me blue (Free verse) by Prince of Void The flute sound makes me blue
so then My head is down
and My soul is down
oh god I'm trying so hard
to keep the flute sound up
for the magic moon
in the cloudless heaven
and for mysterious lover
in the endless silence
that they share a bed of the blue
I'm really down
drifting into the sound
landing on the sand
stepping in the blue
Up the ladder:
This road goes on forever
Down the ladder:
+Girl Broken+
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Posted: January 21, 2009 1:25 PM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2009 1:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.023713 Overall Rank: 7465 Comments:
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Dovina @ 75.82.253.189
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21-Jan-09/3:57 PM
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blue somber flute, bright bird-like flute. I like baroque flute best. breathy and down - flute. nice
hmm, no.
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